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#1
23-12-2014, 12:36 AM
Mouje ghame hayaat shrabor kar gayi
Khamosh dhadkanoN mai bada shor kar gayi

Bekhud sa ho gaya mai raqso suroor mai
Or uski humnawaaii mujhey mor kar gayi

MeiN hoke bawafa bhi to ik bewafa raha
NazroN mai meri mujhko hi wo chor kar gayi

Simti si ladki de gayi paighaam aakhirash
Nazuk kalaii uski bhi kuch zor kar gayi

Mujh pe hayaat kaisa ye ehsaan kar dia
Har faisla tu mira tu labe gor kar gayi

Aansu shabe firaaq mai ruk hi nahi sake
Zabte sada ko meri wo kamzor kar gayi

Aslam jo darde jaaN tha wo jaane hayaat hai
Nazuk ye kaam rishtey ki ik dor kar gayi
Zindagi ke haseen lamhe ka
Khoobsurat sa intekhaab ho tum
(aslam noor aslam)
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#2
23-12-2014, 12:16 PM
Masha Allah ...

MeiN hoke bawafa bhi to ik bewafa raha
NazroN mai meri mujhko hi wo chor kar gayi

Simti si ladki de gayi paighaam aakhirash
Nazuk kalaii uski bhi kuch zor kar gayi

Mujh pe hayaat kaisa ye ehsaan kar dia
Har faisla tu mira tu labe gor kar gayi

Aansu shabe firaaq mai ruk hi nahi sake
Zabte sada ko meri wo kamzor kar gayi


behad khoob surat ashaar hain

lajawaab ghazal hai aslam sahab

matla khaas pasand aaya mujhe

yuhi mehfil raushan karte rahiye...Smile
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#3
29-12-2014, 02:57 PM
(23-12-2014, 12:16 PM)zainy Wrote: Masha Allah ...

MeiN hoke bawafa bhi to ik bewafa raha
NazroN mai meri mujhko hi wo chor kar gayi

Simti si ladki de gayi paighaam aakhirash
Nazuk kalaii uski bhi kuch zor kar gayi

Mujh pe hayaat kaisa ye ehsaan kar dia
Har faisla tu mira tu labe gor kar gayi

Aansu shabe firaaq mai ruk hi nahi sake
Zabte sada ko meri wo kamzor kar gayi


behad khoob surat ashaar hain

lajawaab ghazal hai aslam sahab

matla khaas pasand aaya mujhe

yuhi mehfil raushan karte rahiye...Smile

Ghazal ki pazeraaii ke liyN aapka tahe dil se mamnoon huN yuN hi mere hosle ko badhaati rahiye aur apni zindadili ka ehsaas dilaati rahiye bhut nawaazish


aslam
Zindagi ke haseen lamhe ka
Khoobsurat sa intekhaab ho tum
(aslam noor aslam)
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#4
30-12-2014, 03:25 PM
(23-12-2014, 12:22 PM)N@zneen Wrote: Waaaahhhhh! Bahot khoob aslam saHb...umdaa ghazal hui hai.....tamaam ashaar ek se badhkar ek.....quoted ashaar beinteha pasand aaye....dheron daad o mubarakbaad.

Nazneen saheba ghazal ki pasndgi ke liyN tahe dil se aapka shukrguzaar huN nawaazish


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31-12-2014, 03:10 PM
(23-12-2014, 12:36 AM)aslam noor aslam Wrote: Mouje ghame hayaat shrabor kar gayi
Khamosh dhadkanoN mai bada shor kar gayi

Bekhud sa ho gaya mai raqso suroor mai
Or uski humnawaaii mujhey mor kar gayi

MeiN hoke bawafa bhi to ik bewafa raha
NazroN mai meri mujhko hi wo chor kar gayi

Simti si ladki de gayi paighaam aakhirash
Nazuk kalaii uski bhi kuch zor kar gayi

Mujh pe hayaat kaisa ye ehsaan kar dia
Har faisla tu mira tu labe gor kar gayi

Aansu shabe firaaq mai ruk hi nahi sake
Zabte sada ko meri wo kamzor kar gayi

Aslam jo darde jaaN tha wo jaane hayaat hai
Nazuk ye kaam rishtey ki ik dor kar gayi

wah kya baat hai Aslam Saheb

Ek se badh kar ek sher pesh kiya hai aap ne.

khaas kar eh ashaar to bohut hi umdah hain.

Mujh pe hayaat kaisa ye ehsaan kar dia
Har faisla tu mira tu labe gor kar gayi

Aansu shabe firaaq mai ruk hi nahi sake
Zabte sada ko meri wo kamzor kar gayi

Puri Ghazal mubarak ho

Mujeeb Parwaaz
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#6
15-01-2015, 10:14 AM
(31-12-2014, 03:10 PM)Mujeeb Parwaaz Wrote: wah kya baat hai Aslam Saheb

Ek se badh kar ek sher pesh kiya hai aap ne.

khaas kar eh ashaar to  bohut hi umdah hain.

Mujh pe hayaat kaisa ye ehsaan kar dia
Har faisla tu mira tu labe gor kar gayi

Aansu shabe firaaq mai ruk hi nahi sake
Zabte sada ko meri wo kamzor kar gayi

Puri Ghazal mubarak ho

Mujeeb Parwaaz

Mujeeb sahab ghazal ki pazeeraii ke liyN aapka tahe dil se shukrguzaar huN hosla Afzaii ke liyN bhut bhut shukriyah nawaazish

aslam
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Khoobsurat sa intekhaab ho tum
(aslam noor aslam)
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