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Amanush' Amanush Effect...! ' By Rohin Ji & Danny
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The Amanush effect.....

I had nothing but tears
yet I will present you a smile
I have no words to express
but I will sing you a song


Let my tears be engaged to your smile
I ask not for eternity but for a while
No words to my lips did ever belong
Still I will sing none but only your song


I am nothing but darkness for you
But I will be your shadow forever
I try to follow you everywhere
But I am with you everytime


The mantle of life is a walking shadow
Look not at me as your dark sorrow
I am like an echo in the wilderness
Unseen but forever in your loneliness


I might be a forgotten story
But you can find me in torn pages
I am like an empty bottle
But I have plenty for you to drink


My name…I know, if in any book you find
Those pages you’ll tear and throw behind
In Love’s war I may have lost only a battle
But I will come again in your heart to settle


I can spend years listening to you say
But I know it will haunt me always
I believe that the world is mine
But I know you are the world to me


I have only heard you laughing a few time
How I wish to see your laughing sometime
As a blind man I have felt only your sunshine
Will I ever see the sun rising from horizon mine


I asked for your one touch my love
But you said you have no hands
I wish I could give you a lot more
But today I have nothing but "Amanush"


A touch...My Love! Only a simple innocent touch
A kiss on my brow…Oh! that will be far too much
A Prince Charming…? How can I ever dream to be
“Amanush” I am and such I am condemned to be


Amanush

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Ps Blue color written by Rohin Ji & green one by me...!
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapnaa dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai

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#2
Danny jee..

Simply superb creation .... Thumbs Up

hats off.. Smile

Keep writing,

Regards,
*hSn* : parStaar

kia kaheN kuch kaha nahii jaata!
aah...! chup bhii raha nahii jaata.. (Mir Taqi Mir)


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#3
Just mind-blowing..............! hats off .. reps added.++

Regards
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#4
(14-11-2014, 12:00 AM)Amanush Wrote:
The Amanush effect.....

I had nothing but tears
yet I will present you a smile
I have no words to express
but I will sing you a song


Let my tears be engaged to your smile
I ask not for eternity but for a while
No words to my lips did ever belong
Still I will sing none but only your song


I am nothing but darkness for you
But I will be your shadow forever
I try to follow you everywhere
But I am with you everytime


The mantle of life is a walking shadow
Look not at me as your dark sorrow
I am like an echo in the wilderness
Unseen but forever in your loneliness


I might be a forgotten story
But you can find me in torn pages
I am like an empty bottle
But I have plenty for you to drink


My name…I know, if in any book you find
Those pages you’ll tear and throw behind
In Love’s war I may have lost only a battle
But I will come again in your heart to settle


I can spend years listening to you say
But I know it will haunt me always
I believe that the world is mine
But I know you are the world to me


I have only heard you laughing a few time
How I wish to see your laughing sometime
As a blind man I have felt only your sunshine
Will I ever see the sun rising from horizon mine


I asked for your one touch my love
But you said you have no hands
I wish I could give you a lot more
But today I have nothing but "Amanush"


A touch...My Love! Only a simple innocent touch
A kiss on my brow…Oh! that will be far too much
A Prince Charming…? How can I ever dream to be
“Amanush” I am and such I am condemned to be


Amanush

Smile

Ps Blue color written by Rohin Ji & green one by me...!

fantastically presented Danny ji...love this read.............hope to read more of your creations....
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