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Harash MahajanI'll come home soon.
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A SOLDIER


I'll
come home soon.
wrote a cadet,
from an army troop.
she read the letter
sipping a tomato soup.
smelling some foul
threw her bowl.
she broke her bangles
and
began to cry,
screamed no! no!
he can't die.
she was upset
heart was blown
there was no one
to whom could shown.
deadly,deadly
like a stone,
the cadet really
came back home.
but in coffin with white sheet enfold.
this isn't the only
died in war,
there'r many
who became stars.
who'll tell the things to thee
whom is to bear
the only 'she'.
son was crying
the mom was weeping,
dad was saying
he made us proud
but
she was pathetically cursing
her soul in crowd.

~~~~*Harash Mahajan*~~~
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#2
Very nice piece, harsh ji..! Every single line speaks directly to the heart...!

a big salute to all the soldiers
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#3
Harashji,

This poem really touches the heart.....

The depth in it's words is so immense..... Smile

EXCELLENT!!!!!!
Heartसफ़ीरHeart

मरमरीं रूख़ से हर रोज़ नयी सुबह चले
सुर्ख़ गालों पे तेरी पलकें झुके शाम ढले

مرمریں راکھ سے ہر روز نیی صوبۂ چلے
سرکہ گالوں پی تری پلکیں جھکے شام دھلے

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#4
very very touching...........................

*hSn* : parStaar

kia kaheN kuch kaha nahii jaata!
aah...! chup bhii raha nahii jaata.. (Mir Taqi Mir)


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#5
Zainy ji, aadil ji, Hassan ji and Naazneen ji.............aadaab.....I am very much obliged the way you expressed your views about a soldier .....perhaps for me ....I'm very emotional person...the moment I started this piece became very difficult to move but I managed and my pen did not stop but bleeded blue........

Thanks for reading me and my emotions.....do come to read me my ahsaas

Thanks

Harash Mahajan
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(26-11-2014, 11:25 PM)zainy Wrote: Very nice piece, harsh ji..! Every single line speaks directly to the heart...!

a big salute to all the soldiers

(27-11-2014, 10:42 AM)aadeil Wrote: Harashji,

This poem really touches the heart.....

The depth in it's words is so immense..... Smile

EXCELLENT!!!!!!

(27-11-2014, 10:47 AM)Hassan Wrote: very very touching...........................


(27-11-2014, 10:50 AM)N@zneen Wrote: Beautiful and very touching...........

Zainy ji, aadil ji, Hassan ji and Naazneen ji.............aadaab.....I am very much obliged the way you expressed your views about a soldier .....perhaps for me ....I'm very emotional person...the moment I started this piece became very difficult to move but I managed and my pen did not stop but bleeded blue........

Thanks for reading me and my emotions.....do come to read me my ahsaas

Thanks

Harash Mahajan
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