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Amanush' I'm In Love...! '
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Of a dame I have fallen in love who
in her eyes has the dawn and sunset…
A feeling so strange inside I have met
however, it make me happy and sad too.
A fear invades me at the only thought
of her going away leaving a lonely heart,
I know that I would die her without ,
My heaven she is of mysteries so sweet .

And I imagine the sky to be of her jealous
For such a bright moon it can never have,
destiny smiles when thinking about us,
she is the future for whom in hell I’ll dive.

it is only joy in a heart that beats for her,
A star so far, maybe I’ll look at her forever.


Amanush

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Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapnaa dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai

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#2
Amanush ji,
Nice poem... Smile

Keep writing....
Heartसफ़ीरHeart

मरमरीं रूख़ से हर रोज़ नयी सुबह चले
सुर्ख़ गालों पे तेरी पलकें झुके शाम ढले

مرمریں راکھ سے ہر روز نیی صوبۂ چلے
سرکہ گالوں پی تری پلکیں جھکے شام دھلے

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#3
Thanks so much for appreciating, Adil Ji & Naaz Ji...!

Khush raheiN

DuaaoN ke saath

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Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapnaa dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai

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#4
Lovely poem..
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sapna

Life is a lesson you’ll learn it when you’re through. Smile  Heart
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#5
(07-11-2014, 02:27 PM)Amanush Wrote: Of a dame I have fallen in love who
in her eyes has the dawn and sunset…
A feeling so strange inside I have met
however, it make me happy and sad too.
A fear invades me at the only thought
of her going away leaving a lonely heart,
I know that I would die her without ,
My heaven she is of mysteries so sweet .

And I imagine the sky to be of her jealous
For such a bright moon it can never have,
destiny smiles when thinking about us,
she is the future for whom in hell I’ll dive.

it is only joy in a heart that beats for her,
A star so far, maybe I’ll look at her forever.


Amanush

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Speechless!

Aadaab Danny Jee!!

Your poem.... am amazed how could your encapsulate so many feelings of a heart immersed in love.. this is a poem that is timeless...for it has captured those sweet yet painful emotions witch such skill am truly amazed!! Hats off... and many many congratulation on such a beautiful work of art!! Will be eagerly waiting for more Sir!!


Duago
Ahmad
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#6
Nice poem, Danny sir...

Keep up the good work.... Smile
Heartसफ़ीरHeart

मरमरीं रूख़ से हर रोज़ नयी सुबह चले
सुर्ख़ गालों पे तेरी पलकें झुके शाम ढले

مرمریں راکھ سے ہر روز نیی صوبۂ چلے
سرکہ گالوں پی تری پلکیں جھکے شام دھلے

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#7
absolutely beautiful
nice rhymes
good words
superb...Smile
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