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(12-11-2014, 09:30 AM)aadeil Wrote: tum se raah-o-rasm baDHaa kar divaane kehlaayeN kyuN
jin galiyoN meN patthar barseN un galiyoN meN jaayeN kyuN

-- Kafil Aazar Amrohi

(12-11-2014, 09:41 AM)aadeil Wrote: merii purani diary se ek ghazal ke kuchh ashaar.... Smile is meN ek koshish hum ne kii thii ki ek hi sher meN do kaafiyoN kaa istemaal kiyaa hai... Smile

chehra chhipaana hai to uTHaanaa naqaab kyuN
sharm-o-hayaa hai phir yuN dikhaanaa shabaab kyuN

Karke numaaisheN wo yadee husn-e-jism kee
jalwe dikhaaye khud to zamaanaa kharaab kyuN

paemaane gar wo ginke pilaate haiN aaNKHoN se
shokhee-e-beKHudee pe bahaanaa sharaab kyuN

shikwe jo karte jaate kiseeke naseeb pe
apnee museebatoN pe jataanaa hijaab kyuN

deke tujhe ye dil jo ghareeb ban ke rah gayaa
kehte wo Tute dil ko begaanaa sawaab kyuN

(12-11-2014, 09:51 AM)aadeil Wrote: aur ek meri apnii Ghazal ke kuchh ashaar... Smile

mere saath kal baDHe the wahi haath chhuDaaye phir kyuN
go rahe puraane rishte ye daraaD aaye phir kyuN

tere haath jal rahe haiN jo tu thaam rahaa hai mujhko
hai savaal mere dil ko tu ye aag lagaaye phir kyuN

ye zaraa zaraa se aaNsooN ye zaraa zaraa si muskaan
mere GHum pe ye gumaaN hai wo hue paraaye phir kyuN

hai jo zaKHm aise khaaye ki lahoo bhii beh na paaye
mere ashq sukh gaye haiN koii dil jalaaye phir kyuN

tere pyaar meN jiyaa maiN jo usii se mar rahaa hooN
ye yakiin ab ki gul ke rahe KHaar* saaye phir kyuN

(*thorns)

ye Safiir tere taraane na koii bayaan-e-Ghalib
magar aaj bhii wo GHum hai na ho zaar* haaye** phir kyuN

(*to wail; cry profusely, **along with)

(12-11-2014, 09:58 AM)aadeil Wrote: vaadoN ke jangal meN 'Aazar' hum to barosN bhaTke haiN
aap kareN kyuN dil pe bharosa aap ye dhokaa khaayeN kyuN

-- Kafeel Aazar Amrohi

(12-11-2014, 09:58 AM)N@zneen Wrote: Bahot khoob dost lagta hai tumhara fav.word hai 'kyuN' Smile do ghazal bhi likha hua hai is radeef par aur MashaAllah bahot khoob likha hai Smile

Sharing bhi umdaa hai usi ghazal se ek sher meri tarafse.....

Haan ham ne bhi aaj kisii ka naazuk sa dil to.Daa hai
shahr-e-vafa kii rasm yahii hai ham is par sharmaae.N kyuN


- Kafil Aazar Amrohi

wahhhh! waahh!!!... ahbaab nay khoob meHfil sajaayi hai apni ghazaloN se aur ashaar say..... Thumbs Up

ik muddat se jahaN kaafilay guzray hii nahiiN
aisi raahoN per chiraag jalaata hai kyun


(not mine)
*hSn* : parStaar

kia kaheN kuch kaha nahii jaata!
aah...! chup bhii raha nahii jaata.. (Mir Taqi Mir)


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(12-11-2014, 11:46 AM)aadeil Wrote: shukriya Naaz.. Smile vaise fav. kii baat pe toh bas itnaa kahungaa ki us vaqt zehn meN savaalaat honge kisi vajah se ki 'kyuN'? aur ek sher ban gayaa to GHazal ban jaati hai! Smile

aur masha allah! bahot khub sher pesh kiyaa hai.... Smile

lo ek aur.... Smile
gardish-e-mehr-o-maah* bhii gardish-e-jaam** ban gayii
sub'h na ladkhadaae kyuN shaam na jhuum jaaye kyuN

-- Ravish Siddiqi
*movement of sun & moon
**movement of wine goblet

waaaaaaaahh! waaaaaaaaaaaah!.... bohat bohat khooob sharing.. Adil bhai Thumbs Up
*hSn* : parStaar

kia kaheN kuch kaha nahii jaata!
aah...! chup bhii raha nahii jaata.. (Mir Taqi Mir)


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jab vo jamaal-e-dil-faroz* surat-e-mehr-e-niim-roz**
aap hi ho nazzaaraa-soz*** parde meN muNh chhupaae kyuN

-- Mirza Ghalib
*face whose beauty lights up the heart
**face like mid-day sun
***passionate spectacle
Heartसफ़ीरHeart

मरमरीं रूख़ से हर रोज़ नयी सुबह चले
सुर्ख़ गालों पे तेरी पलकें झुके शाम ढले

مرمریں راکھ سے ہر روز نیی صوبۂ چلے
سرکہ گالوں پی تری پلکیں جھکے شام دھلے

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(12-11-2014, 11:54 AM)aadeil Wrote: jab vo jamaal-e-dil-faroz* surat-e-mehr-e-niim-roz**
aap hi ho nazzaaraa-soz*** parde meN muNh chhupaae kyuN

-- Mirza Ghalib
*face whose beauty lights up the heart
**face like mid-day sun
***passionate spectacle

wahhh! waaah!... bohat umdaaH Thumbs Up Ghalib saahab ke kia kehnay........ aur aap shagird-e-Ghalib.. Adil bhai Smile Smile
*hSn* : parStaar

kia kaheN kuch kaha nahii jaata!
aah...! chup bhii raha nahii jaata.. (Mir Taqi Mir)


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Waah bahut hi umdaaH peshkash padhne ko mil rahi hai.....sabhi doston ko mera salaam......kuch ashaar dekhen.....

Zindagi tumse jo mili thi uspar !
Maut ehsaaN jataaye kyuN !!

Raaton ko charaagoN se door rakkha hai !
khwaabon me roshni samaaye kyuN !!

Band aankhoN me kaid duniya hai meri !
Falak se chand mujhe chahe to chahe kyuN !!

Phir hume bazaar me baitha diya hai sabne !
Hum dil ke khridaaron ke nakhre uthaayeN kyuN !!

Aaghaaz-e-ishq me hi nakaam ho gaye !
Raah-e-safar me phir hum shamma jalaayeN kyuN !!
Tumhaare liye to dhadakta tha ye dil .....
Tumhi ban gaye in dhadkanon ke dushman .......
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(12-11-2014, 12:11 PM)Pankaj Mishra Wrote: Waah bahut hi umdaaH peshkash padhne ko mil rahi hai.....sabhi doston ko mera salaam......kuch ashaar dekhen.....

Zindagi tumse jo mili thi uspar !
Maut ehsaaN jataaye kyuN !!

Raaton ko charaagoN se door rakkha hai !
khwaabon me roshni samaaye kyuN !!

Band aankhoN me kaid duniya hai meri !
Falak se chand mujhe chahe to chahe kyuN !!

Phir hume bazaar me baitha diya hai sabne !
Hum dil ke khridaaron ke nakhre uthaayeN kyuN !!

Aaghaaz-e-ishq me hi nakaam ho gaye !
Raah-e-safar me phir hum shamma jalaayeN kyuN !!

wahhhhhhhhhhhhhh! wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Pankaj bhai.. kia kehne...

aap ny to meHfil hii loot lii... Thumbs Up superb janab...... Smile

likhte rahiye...
*hSn* : parStaar

kia kaheN kuch kaha nahii jaata!
aah...! chup bhii raha nahii jaata.. (Mir Taqi Mir)


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bohat khoob doston.....Thumbs Up

Wo Halaat Ki Majboori Se Chahta Tha Mujhe ...
Phir Har Pal Usne Apna Pyaar Jataya Kyon ???

nm
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Aap Ki Dost

Zaara


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Waah Zainy ji waah..

Khud qatl karkey poochtin' hai maajra hai kya
Khuda tu aise qaatilon' ko bhejta hai kyun...
(SR)c

(12-11-2014, 12:46 PM)zainy Wrote: bohat khoob doston.....Thumbs Up

Wo Halaat Ki Majboori Se Chahta Tha Mujhe ...
Phir Har Pal Usne Apna Pyaar Jataya Kyon ???

nm
Shayaraana andaaz hai tera,
Mujhsey mohabbat karney ka...
Har lafz mein intazaam hai,
Mere tabhiyat sey marney ka....

(SR) c
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(12-11-2014, 12:46 PM)zainy Wrote: bohat khoob doston.....Thumbs Up

Wo Halaat Ki Majboori Se Chahta Tha Mujhe ...
Phir Har Pal Usne Apna Pyaar Jataya Kyon ???

nm

(12-11-2014, 12:55 PM)Shayaraina Wrote: Waah Zainy ji waah..

Khud qatl karkey poochtin' hai maajra hai kya
Khuda tu aise qaatilon' ko bhejta hai kyun...
(SR)c

wahh! waaah!... bohat bohat khoob... Thumbs Up
*hSn* : parStaar

kia kaheN kuch kaha nahii jaata!
aah...! chup bhii raha nahii jaata.. (Mir Taqi Mir)


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Shukriya Hassan Bhai..ek aur peshkash aapki nazar....

Kuch toe mohabbat mein meri hai sahi warnaa
Inkaar mein Ikraar ki dikhti jhalak hai kyun..(SR)c



(12-11-2014, 01:15 PM)Hassan Wrote: wahh! waaah!... bohat bohat khoob... Thumbs Up
Shayaraana andaaz hai tera,
Mujhsey mohabbat karney ka...
Har lafz mein intazaam hai,
Mere tabhiyat sey marney ka....

(SR) c
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(12-11-2014, 11:46 AM)Hassan Wrote: wahhhh! waahh!!!... ahbaab nay khoob meHfil sajaayi hai apni ghazaloN se aur ashaar say..... Thumbs Up

ik muddat se jahaN kaafilay guzray hii nahiiN
aisi raahoN per chiraag jalaata hai kyun


(not mine)

(12-11-2014, 11:54 AM)aadeil Wrote: jab vo jamaal-e-dil-faroz* surat-e-mehr-e-niim-roz**
aap hi ho nazzaaraa-soz*** parde meN muNh chhupaae kyuN

-- Mirza Ghalib
*face whose beauty lights up the heart
**face like mid-day sun
***passionate spectacle

(12-11-2014, 12:07 PM)Hassan Wrote: wahhh! waaah!... bohat umdaaH Thumbs Up Ghalib saahab ke kia kehnay........ aur aap shagird-e-Ghalib.. Adil bhai Smile Smile

haa haa haa..
Hassanbhai, Ghalib saab kii baat to hai hi niraalii, Smile par hum kahaaN unke shagird ban paayenge, janaab... ye hamaare haq meN nahi Smile..

vaise aapka shukriya, dost is darjaa kadardaani ke liye Smile
duaaGo....
Heartसफ़ीरHeart

मरमरीं रूख़ से हर रोज़ नयी सुबह चले
सुर्ख़ गालों पे तेरी पलकें झुके शाम ढले

مرمریں راکھ سے ہر روز نیی صوبۂ چلے
سرکہ گالوں پی تری پلکیں جھکے شام دھلے

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(12-11-2014, 11:46 AM)Hassan Wrote: wahhhh! waahh!!!... ahbaab nay khoob meHfil sajaayi hai apni ghazaloN se aur ashaar say..... Thumbs Up

ik muddat se jahaN kaafilay guzray hii nahiiN
aisi raahoN per chiraag jalaata hai kyun


(not mine)

waah Hassanbhai,
bahot khub sharing.... Smile
Heartसफ़ीरHeart

मरमरीं रूख़ से हर रोज़ नयी सुबह चले
सुर्ख़ गालों पे तेरी पलकें झुके शाम ढले

مرمریں راکھ سے ہر روز نیی صوبۂ چلے
سرکہ گالوں پی تری پلکیں جھکے شام دھلے

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(12-11-2014, 12:11 PM)Pankaj Mishra Wrote: Waah bahut hi umdaaH peshkash padhne ko mil rahi hai.....sabhi doston ko mera salaam......kuch ashaar dekhen.....

Zindagi tumse jo mili thi uspar !
Maut ehsaaN jataaye kyuN !!

Raaton ko charaagoN se door rakkha hai !
khwaabon me roshni samaaye kyuN !!

Band aankhoN me kaid duniya hai meri !
Falak se chand mujhe chahe to chahe kyuN !!

Phir hume bazaar me baitha diya hai sabne !
Hum dil ke khridaaron ke nakhre uthaayeN kyuN !!

Aaghaaz-e-ishq me hi nakaam ho gaye !
Raah-e-safar me phir hum shamma jalaayeN kyuN !!

umdaa, Pankajji...
bahot hi khubsurat ashaar haiN.... Smile
Heartसफ़ीरHeart

मरमरीं रूख़ से हर रोज़ नयी सुबह चले
सुर्ख़ गालों पे तेरी पलकें झुके शाम ढले

مرمریں راکھ سے ہر روز نیی صوبۂ چلے
سرکہ گالوں پی تری پلکیں جھکے شام دھلے

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(12-11-2014, 12:46 PM)zainy Wrote: bohat khoob doston.....Thumbs Up

Wo Halaat Ki Majboori Se Chahta Tha Mujhe ...
Phir Har Pal Usne Apna Pyaar Jataya Kyon ???

nm

waaahh Zainyji,
bahot khub sharing.... Thanks Smile
Heartसफ़ीरHeart

मरमरीं रूख़ से हर रोज़ नयी सुबह चले
सुर्ख़ गालों पे तेरी पलकें झुके शाम ढले

مرمریں راکھ سے ہر روز نیی صوبۂ چلے
سرکہ گالوں پی تری پلکیں جھکے شام دھلے

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(12-11-2014, 12:55 PM)Shayaraina Wrote: Khud qatl karkey poochtin' hai maajra hai kya
Khuda tu aise qaatilon' ko bhejta hai kyun...
(SR)c

(12-11-2014, 02:00 PM)Shayaraina Wrote: Kuch toe mohabbat mein meri hai sahi warnaa
Inkaar mein Ikraar ki dikhti jhalak hai kyun..(SR)c

waaaaaaaaaahhhh!!!
laajavaab, Sanjayji.....

donoN ashaar kamaal ke haiN......... dheroN dheroN daad...... Smile
Heartसफ़ीरHeart

मरमरीं रूख़ से हर रोज़ नयी सुबह चले
सुर्ख़ गालों पे तेरी पलकें झुके शाम ढले

مرمریں راکھ سے ہر روز نیی صوبۂ چلے
سرکہ گالوں پی تری پلکیں جھکے شام دھلے

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Thank u so so so much Bhai.
(12-11-2014, 03:13 PM)aadeil Wrote: waaaaaaaaaahhhh!!!
laajavaab, Sanjayji.....

donoN ashaar kamaal ke haiN......... dheroN dheroN daad...... Smile
Shayaraana andaaz hai tera,
Mujhsey mohabbat karney ka...
Har lafz mein intazaam hai,
Mere tabhiyat sey marney ka....

(SR) c
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(12-11-2014, 02:00 PM)Shayaraina Wrote: Shukriya Hassan Bhai..ek aur peshkash aapki nazar....

Kuch toe mohabbat mein meri hai sahi warnaa
Inkaar mein Ikraar ki dikhti jhalak hai kyun..(SR)c

wahhh ! waah! .. Sanjay jee.. kia kehne.. bohat bohat khoob Thumbs Up

chaleN meri taraf se bhii aik koshish:-

chamaktay sooraj ko dekhne ka kehte ho!
maiN be-sabab apni aankheN jalaooN kyuN?

be-sabab : without reason
*hSn* : parStaar

kia kaheN kuch kaha nahii jaata!
aah...! chup bhii raha nahii jaata.. (Mir Taqi Mir)


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Arre waaah Hassan Bhai kya khoob kaha...:-)



(12-11-2014, 03:57 PM)Hassan Wrote: wahhh ! waah! .. Sanjay jee.. kia kehne.. bohat bohat khoob Thumbs Up

chaleN meri taraf se bhii aik koshish:-

chamaktay sooraj ko dekhne ka kehte ho!
maiN be-sabab apni aankheN jalaooN kyuN?

be-sabab : without reason
Shayaraana andaaz hai tera,
Mujhsey mohabbat karney ka...
Har lafz mein intazaam hai,
Mere tabhiyat sey marney ka....

(SR) c
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waah Hassanbhai, bahot khub.. kya baat keh dii bhai... chamaktey suraj ko dekh besabab aankh jalaaye kyuN... sahi baat hai Smile

lijiye Daagh Dehlvi saab ka sher-e-matlaa...
dil hi to hai na aaE kyuN dam hi to hai na jaaE kyuN
hum ko KHudaa jo sabr de tujh saa hasiiN banaaE kyuN....


-- Daagh Dehlvi
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मरमरीं रूख़ से हर रोज़ नयी सुबह चले
सुर्ख़ गालों पे तेरी पलकें झुके शाम ढले

مرمریں راکھ سے ہر روز نیی صوبۂ چلے
سرکہ گالوں پی تری پلکیں جھکے شام دھلے

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be-KHabar duniyaa ko rehne do KHabar karte ho kyuN
dostoN mere dukhoN ko mushtahar* karte ho kyuN

*announce, declare

-- Iqbal Sajid
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मरमरीं रूख़ से हर रोज़ नयी सुबह चले
सुर्ख़ गालों पे तेरी पलकें झुके शाम ढले

مرمریں راکھ سے ہر روز نیی صوبۂ چلے
سرکہ گالوں پی تری پلکیں جھکے شام دھلے

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