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jeet jainamsabaa fir uskaa,,,,,,
#1
sabaa fir uska paigaam laayi hai,
jisne dee yeh aghosh e tanhaai hai,

kaise maaf karo,n uske gunah saare,
zeete zee jisne meri hasti mitaai hai,

tadpte rahe sada khushi ke pallo,n ko,
mili to sirf hame apno se ruswaai hai,

ahal e zahaan ne thokar joh maari Yuh,
apne shahar se hui hamari vidaai hai,

Jo bhi kareeb aayaa chala gaya chore,
mohhobat main apno,n se hui judaai hai,

dil main rehkar dil todne waalo,n par,
aksr jeet ne apni khushiya lutaai hai,
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#2
Too good.
Dheror daad.

(19-06-2015, 02:23 PM)jeet jainam Wrote: sabaa  fir  uska  paigaam  laayi hai,
jisne  dee  yeh  aghosh e tanhaai hai,

kaise  maaf karo,n  uske  gunah saare,
zeete zee jisne meri hasti mitaai hai,

tadpte rahe sada khushi ke pallo,n ko,
mili to sirf hame apno se ruswaai hai,

ahal e zahaan ne thokar joh maari Yuh,
apne  shahar se hui hamari vidaai hai,

Jo bhi kareeb  aayaa chala gaya chore,
mohhobat main apno,n se hui judaai hai,

dil main rehkar dil todne waalo,n par,
aksr jeet ne apni khushiya lutaai hai,
Shayaraana andaaz hai tera,
Mujhsey mohabbat karney ka...
Har lafz mein intazaam hai,
Mere tabhiyat sey marney ka....

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#3
(19-06-2015, 05:18 PM)Aprajita Wrote: SIMPLYY SUPERB ... BAHUT HE KHUB JEET SAHAB .... LAJWAB LIKHA DAAD KABOOL FARMAYEIN

bohat bohat shukriya aprajita g
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(19-06-2015, 11:55 PM)N@zneen Wrote: very nice...achcha likha

bohat bohat shukriya nazneen g
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(25-06-2015, 05:08 PM)Shayaraina Wrote: Too good.
Dheror daad.
bohat bohat shukriya sir g
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#6
Jo bhi kareeb aayaa chala gaya chore,
mohhobat main apno,n se hui judaai hai,

dil main rehkar dil todne waalo,n par,
aksr jeet ne apni khushiya lutaai hai,

Wahh! Jeet jee bahot achcha likha, bahot achcha laga par k
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(28-07-2015, 09:28 PM)Arshi Wrote: Jo bhi kareeb aayaa chala gaya chore,
mohhobat main apno,n se hui judaai hai,

dil main rehkar dil todne waalo,n par,
aksr jeet ne apni khushiya lutaai hai,

Wahh! Jeet jee bahot achcha likha, bahot achcha laga par k

shukriya arshi ji
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